360° of Preparation

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Losing everything earthly for one that's ethereal.
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(Loop poetry at 4 syllables per line)

I'm now prepared,
Prepared to lose;
Lose it, them, all.
All that matters.

Matters for once,
Once long before.
Before and now,
Now even more.

Even more so,
So now's the time,
Time to detach,
Detach from past.

Past that burdens,
Burdens my heart,
Heart and my mind,
Mind that's once blind.

Blind of my needs,
Needs and the wants,
Wants that were err,
Erred just in vain.

Vain and contrived,
Contrived present,
Present be cleared,
Cleared of my fears.

Fears of unknown,
Unknown stages,
Stages and fits,
Fits of sadness,

Sadness that shows,
Shows in my veins,
Veins where these flows,
Flows to future.

Future that's doomed,
Doomed for failure,
Failure or not,
Not be worried.

Worried for naught,
Naught else is true,
True then construed.
Construed actions.

Actions to let,
Let emotions,
Emotions fly,
Fly and just live.

Live without hurt,
Hurt and masked pain,
Pain surely nerves,
Nerves or suffers.

Suffers you not,
Not if you are:
Are you prepared
Prepared to lose?

Lose ev'rything;
Ev'rything here,
Here that's worldly,
Worldly and not,
Not ethereal?

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CucumberLemonadeCucumberLemonadealmost 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you

This is my first try on loop poetry. I am happy that you appreciate it. Lovely day!

-CL

CucumberLemonadeCucumberLemonadealmost 5 years agoAuthor
Thank you

This is my first try on loop poetry. I am happy that you appreciate it. Lovely day!

-CL

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Beautiful loop poetry. Not all poets get to loop the starting lines and plot with the last one. Brilliantly done!

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