6:52 A.M

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Lying here in the dark,
     with your heavy skin,
     your drowning sweat,
     and your fleshy stench
     my only concealants.

Your body seems HUGE
and all of a sudden
     foreign.
In my naivetes,
I thought I wanted you.

Your pantinggruntingincessantpounding
seems awkward and m e c h a n i c a l.

Your hot
     s t  i   c     k       y breath
is caught on my neck
and in my hair
with words
to get you off.

And when all
     is said and done,
     my only concealants
     are your heavy skin,
     drying sweat,
     and fleshy stench.

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LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
~~

Comes out smelling

Not exactly like roses;

A guy with this kind of image

Makes even me, seriously think of

Swearing off sex.

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 19 years ago
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erotic

don't think so

well done in parts

I need more coffee, with lots and lots of sugar, now

(I am glad I found it)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Too true

Yep, the scraps of a meal don't look as appetizing as when it is fresh on the plate!

b'brig

Bridget69Bridget69almost 19 years ago
LOL!

A lot of times, things don't look as appealing in the morning. :)

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
I found

humor and sorrow in this poem, great work ...