A BDSM Haiku

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Whip me, beat me
make me cum.
You’re my Master.

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
I CUNT HAIR UR REPLY

beat me daddy 8 to the grill, TK U MLJ LV NV

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
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Give the girl a break... its short, sweet and cute

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
earnest attempt

5-7-5 syllables with nature as the topic with no emotions involved, describing exactly what is seen and relayed. American haiku, more relaxed in its nature and not as strict with 5-7-5. There are several "How to write Haiku" in the How to section of literotica if you still wish to learn Haiku. Don't allow others to scare you off from attempting a style, any style. that is how we learn <grin an "A" for Effort~

Sabina_TolchovskySabina_Tolchovskyabout 18 years ago
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sorry, I will give you 50% for trying...I didn't mean to leave a 0

~S

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
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That, is not a Haiku. A haiku is 5-7-5...try again grasshopper.

~Sabina

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