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a coiled spiral (agile monkeys)

a coiled spiral (agile monkeys)

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Senna Jawa

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you're striving to meet face to face
you already stepped on the tail
and you follow and follow
through
deja vu's...
or flashbacks

wlodzimierz holsztynski ©
1995-10-25

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Senna Jawa

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tazz317 almost 12 years ago

MONKEYS IN THE TREES

being pursued for capture, TK U MLJ LV NV

Senna Jawa almost 17 years agoAuthor

simple but not easy?

Thank you, LeBroz & duddle.

Perhaps this simpple poem is not easy to grasp for many readers. The poem is about the attempt to understand yourself, to face yourself, face to face. One tries to look back, to retrace his/her own steps, and succeeds only in stepping on his/her own tail. One can't even tell for sure which of the past events were real and which were imagined or illusions (flashbacks versus deja vu-s).

Best regards,

Senna Jawa

duddle146 over 17 years ago

looking back.

Everything is deja vu or a flashback. What is wanted is some face to face time...

LeBroz over 17 years ago

Sounds like life in the office.

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