tagNon-Erotic PoetryA Comment on Haiku

A Comment on Haiku

bylostandfounder©

I do not enjoy
Watching a lonely snowflake
Or just one Haiku

For me, words of love
Should fall like a springtime rain
Cleansing the spirit

One must be careful
Words can burn worse than the sun
With scars slow to mend

Leaves fall from trees
Poems are forgotten too
Not dead, just asleep

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