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Click hereA cup of tea
with spring rain,
for a moment
Like <i>Quiet Shade</i>, this captures the feeling so well of a quiet reflective moment.
My initial inclination was to not write a feeback to the poem as it contained images which were (for me) incogruent with each other. Then I was informed by a reliable source (wink) that you like - even very much, getting feedback. By the way, so do I (wink wink). So I'll just share with you those personal difficulties (I am not qualified to do anymore than that). <P>
For me, 'cup of tea' associates with quiet; relaxation; indoors; slow time. 'spring rain' is almost contrasting, not negative, just very different, vibrant; strong; full of energy; outdoors. And 'for a moment' speaks for itself. It was difficult for me to put those three images together in one coherent mental image, but I am sure that you have!
Care to share?