A cynical bitch
is something to see
they leave their comments
anonomously
Who made you the judge
of all that you read
such a small narrow mind
you will never succeed
How dare you judge
what you dont understand
to wound the pride
of an aging man
His dreams and fantasies
are all he has left
to deny him that
would put him to rest
I love his mind
so young and free
age is just a number
and will always be
Keep your comments coming
no matter how shallow
the dreams of today
become realities tomarrow
Yes a cynical bitch
is something to see
leaving their comments
anonomously
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