- Non-Erotic Poetry
- A Cynical Bitch
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A cynical bitch
is something to see
they leave their comments
anonomously
Who made you the judge
of all that you read
such a small narrow mind
you will never succeed
How dare you judge
what you dont understand
to wound the pride
of an aging man
His dreams and fantasies
are all he has left
to deny him that
would put him to rest
I love his mind
so young and free
age is just a number
and will always be
Keep your comments coming
no matter how shallow
the dreams of today
become realities tomarrow
Yes a cynical bitch
is something to see
leaving their comments
anonomously
- COMMENTS
duddle146over 17 years agoPeople supposedly support what they help create. Since they can't 'own' what has been written by others ~ their creative outlet is to use destructive criticism to destroy creativity.
LeBrozover 17 years agoKickin' ass and
Takin' names {anonymous};
Or
What's good for the goose is good for the gander!
Jennifer Cover 19 years agoWell done girl, it's about time someone put the anonymous nasty comments writers in their place! This website is a place for writers to share their hard work and talent with others, its not a school playground and the bitching is not welcome! Good work Petalsonfire!
Anonymousover 19 years agoI have to say that if you decide to allow the option of public comments you have to take the good with the bad, its called freedom of speech! If you can't take the opinion of others then don't allow the option!
