A Dark Thought

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This is my first time submitting anything on this site so be nice! I just love this site and I knew I wanted to add to it. I can’t wait to get feedback. I’m so excited. I really have no explanation of this poem. i never do. I cant plan out what I want to write about it just happens. With yawl’s help I hope to become a better writer! Thankz for reading


She looked out at the moonlit endless sky.
So black.
So silky.
Beautiful.
She wanted to fly, to leap, and to fall. She wanted to touch the untouchable.
So she stood on the ledge, knowing there would be no reincarnation. She hesitated for one second trying to think of any small slip of light that she could take refuge in but she knew there wasn’t.
So she flew, she fell, and she leaped. As she fell there was no last good-byes, no prayers to be prayed. No one loved her.
No one needed her.
But she didn’t cry.
She wouldn’t cry.

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Thank you

A haunting vignette. Keep writing and sharing. Thanks!

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James_SteeleJames_Steelealmost 5 years ago
Wow

This is wonderful. It's so emotionally charged and heartfelt. What a wonderful surprise to discover. There's a bittersweet edge, but it's so affecting. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
First time?

Learn grammer stupid or at least spill currectly

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
WHEN LOOKING FOR DARK AND DIMLY

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