A Devilish Rose: the treat

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Part 2 of the 4 part series

Updated 08/28/2017
Created 09/12/2005
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A Devilish Rose: The Treat

Motel lights under a neon sultry sky
room for rent to extinguish desires cries
mini-skirt starts shrinking as the door is closed
on the floor is a trail of quickly shed clothes

Two bodies wrapped in a night of passion
on lustful sheets she teases by flashing
her ass in the air is wiggled and shook
she's fully exposed, he sheds his boots.

His reaching hands grasping at her flesh
lips crash together then lick, then mesh
the thorns of a rose in nails that bite
fuels a mans fire for the beast to arise.

Taught muscled grips create clashing hips
diving into ravaging nipple bit breasts
pressing himself deeply in tight gripped holds
dancing to passions bloom, is a devilish rose.

Charging is lust in payment seats sitting
devouring a woman that is seductive and pretty
grasping at legs to pull them apart
as beating as drums from a feverish heart.

Bone and flesh in loves clashing thrusts
sweat and fire in the kiln of a body in lust
released is the warmth in a deep dark hole
biting into hell, tasting a Devilish Rose.

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LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uover 18 years ago
hilarious!

you're a very funny very naughty boy Arty!

;)

But then...I already knew that didn't I!

LOL

GREAT JOB!

dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
hot it is.....

and this is what i'm picking out as my favorite:

Bone and flesh in loves clashing thrusts

sweat and fire in the kiln of a body in lust

released is the warmth in a deep dark hole

biting into hell, tasting a Devilish Rose.

*****

nicely done and flows nicely.....don

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
so funny

my minds eye read kilt in the last verse and had to re read...nicely penned...pen on of devil of the inkwell...blue

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

And here we see

the Rose does bloom,

under the care

of a lustful gardener.

Gardening can be such a 'hard' job,

but somebody's got to do it...