a feather's sail~

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a feather whip sails
slapping silent hope
across bare bottom flesh

talented fingers paddle
stroking in an oar's row
red skin's moist wake
ripples a passionate ocean

grasping anchored tendrils
hoist to sail a-breast
while whispering a winded song

skin growls, curls and swells
like the surf imploding into itself
one after another, asking for another
from the sailing feather

Art~

(Inspired by Rhyme Fairy's 'one word' thread)

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swallowedscreamswallowedscreamover 16 years ago
Never before..

Have I wanted to hear for myself, that whistling sail, but hmm..you make it sound so delightful, I might have just changed my mind!Bravo!;)D.

IrishBayouIrishBayouover 17 years ago
And...

kudos to Rhyme Fairy for what must have been a swell of a thread!

IrishBayouIrishBayouover 17 years ago
I coud...

drift away and away and away with you! Lovely swing it has; the to and fro figurative descriptions! Super read!

GoderichGoderichover 17 years ago
Ahoy…

I want to be in a crew’s equipment box and feel her wave over wave pleasure. I like this!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A kinky light piece

{Or is it a lightly kinky piece?}

With a feathery touch

Calling for more...

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