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- A furtive look
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When I look into your eyes
I get lost.
Oh, but if I could just look a minute longer,
But I can't!
If I could, I'd be like a roadsign
And keep still.
I'd be like a heavy flotsam
And simply drown.
Just to look, look, look
If I could.
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ghost_girlover 14 years agoI see
enormous potential in your poetry. Good luck with your writing. I look forward to reading more from you.
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