A Gambler’s Reflections

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I thought I might be the lucky one
as I reached out to touch his arm
leaning in, whispering a suggestion
perhaps we could get together
sometime
later I realized he was the lucky one
he was the one who left
silently, never acknowledging my suggestion
echoes in departing footsteps
mocking the drum of my heart
beating my mind over his loss
I still wonder about him
in the restaurant where we met
as his name appears in circles
when my heart drums a beat
wallowing in mournful defeat
wishing to God I could see
he would’ve never made me lucky

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
WHY ALL THE NEGATIVISM

you are no worse than he, TK U MLJ LV NV

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
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You had the cards but he didn't wanna play....

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 17 years ago
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You had the cards but he didn't wanna play....

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
a little luck

The eternal pick up line for later, "perhaps we could get together sometime." Didn't work this time. Well, better luck ~ next time.

saw_man1saw_man1over 18 years ago
Personal?

Poetry is so much more personal, so much a part of the writer.

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