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Click here"Is he in, out or indifferent?"
She meant her boss, of course, but
it made me wonder
which I was. I mean
I want to be in (who doesn't?) but
how far in is too far?
Do you notice the growing lack of air
and space and light?
Are you aware of drying up and
slowly suffocating?
Out isn't just not in, oh no:
I could be out of it (have been),
on my way out,
out of the loop, my
tiny mind or
to lunch, and
I'm often on a limb,
standing or rageous, but fear
being cold and
dread being left.
Pursuing all these ins and outs leaves
little room for indifference: I will give it my
full attention when I'm
dead.
constructive crit, just wanted you to know I enjoyed your poem. The title is terrific and fits perfectly with the content :)
~ maria
Well written but didn't do it for me but judging by the other opinions this is me.
well who would have thought a poem could be written about in and out? very clever I applaud you
you find a point and expand and expand on it and from it the poem is born. It's glib but also true though I'm not sure how much I like those last few lines. But they do set the rest of the poem in a proper persepctive so I guess they belong there. :-)
Out isn't just not in, oh no:
I could be out of it (have been),
on my way out,
out of the loop, my
tiny mind or
to lunch, and
I'm often on a limb,
standing or rageous, but fear
being cold and
dread being left.
clever little word games that scurry around inside the head, gnawing, rat-like....
of course this is a knock '-' 5!