tagNon-Erotic PoetryA harsh critic

A harsh critic

bySweetOblivion©

There are some who confuse the need to rhyme
and force the words as they would force the verse;
They cannot count and will not stress each line,
and never realise they write far worse
than sanity can bear to read; let's close
the browser down; and let us not suppose
that such endeavours may even exist;
Although these authors would try to evoke
some praise for scribbling words, I'd have dismissed:
A moody critic: yes! I hear you choke
back fury, as I lambaste and peruse
these horrid rhymes that I cannot excuse.

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