- Erotic Poetry
- A Kiss
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Click hereYour eyes are open, the touch of breath.
Lips closed, little puffs of air from my nose.
You get closer, pull my face to yours.
I am fine willow, I bend closer to your shore.
Pray me confess I want you, sway me more.
Breath like butterfly wings, on your face.
Can we hide from each other in this place.
Closer to desire the kiss makes fire,
bodies take over to conspire.
Stronger now forcing the connection,
Barely new but such sweet affection.
Pressed pink lips held and then brushed,
arms tighten sweet bosom crushed.
By sucking the sweet littlest salt,
and the bliss of kiss, who holds the fault?
Tongues find refuge and tasting and pressure,
How deep and abiding this wanton spring pleasure.
Curling lips and suckling so sweet,
Fed by the kiss, that creates such heat.
Hearts in ears, hearts like drums,
Can you hear the sound of love it comes.
This birth of sensation, this virgin desire,
like coming home dancing in the warmth of the home fire.
- COMMENTS
pearlbaptistabout 13 years agoAuthorThankyou so much for your feedback :-) Do you happen to know if it is possible to edit a poem then resubmit it?
vrosej10about 13 years agoI think this one has real promise. Ditch the cliches, shorten it and edit like mad + lose the end rhyme and this would be superb and noteworthy.
