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Click hereA kNote to the Editer
Sitting at the compture, she got mad
Would you stop messin with my ADVERBIAL cLAUSES!
i like them!
so they're
And whassup with the CAPS
I Llke them to.
Their kewl.
... thats not and eclipses
. . . this is
these thingies—are cool two
that just aint write!!!!!!!!!!!!
for you to be so critical
I can rite AHHHHHHHHHHHHH if i wanna
come over hear and tries and stop me.
I'm 5"2" and biggest then you.
aint you got any cents womans?
ARGHHHHHHH!!!!!!
I dont got to chenge it if i dont wanna
And tenses?
Blowing a bubble and letting it pop, she moving forward and kissing her.
Sounds O.K.A.Y to me.
I only used italics seven-teen times
thats not too many isn't it?
Ya know its for emphaticalness.
i like doing this—
then writing goobledygook
—and doing this.
I thinked it was smartical.
"This sucks," she smirked.
A smirk can be a tag, huh!
The noirve of some people.
Who made up the rule about -ly words?
Its simply not faire. I use them beautifully, just kindly ask me sweetly please.
Ill tale you!!!!!
I love her.
and wanna sey thank you
so hear goes, "thank you!!!!!!!!!!"
Now were is my past participle?
I knowed I seen it--
Hah, I showed her she got her jest desert.
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*Rose* to MistressLynn
I love it! The ameture authors lament. I feel you, sister. I would love it you would check out my poems & comment.
Brilliant and so coded correct, Free Prose poetry and the boundaries in affect, Should be only those the author sets, Put on 'otica stage then viewer be aware, It's your mind's smallness that coms revealed, Here is not an exam submission, In fact I am not aware of a single, Ph.d entry. . Just comments that sometimes have me, Wondering how poor Your mental health Med services be, Freedom is mostly under-pinned by the pen. Mightier than sword or missile and, Of course that means you can write what you think, But the only Life condemnation allowed, Is yourself into a hospital bed and jacket. Unless of course faced by threat or lethal prejudice, In terms of Race, or Sexuality, or Health Ability. You Best check biography well because, Just one day perhaps the law will deal, Properly with Humane Rights.