A Long Night

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There’s a place inside me
That you know how to find
Your fingers slide there
Curving just right
You like hearing me moan
Calling your name
As those fingers glide
In and out of my body
Your lips find my nub
Sucking as I writhe
Getting me closer
With every timed movement
I grip your hair
My back arches
You bring me to that place
Over and over
Until I can’t take anymore
Then you start again
With just a caress
Not wanting to stop
Until I’m completely spent

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jackieizluvjackieizluvover 15 years ago
Wow

Oh my, that was profoundly beautiful. I think that such wide range of emotions could be showcased with so few words. I also would like to create poetry like that but I'm not sure if I'm that talented. Maybe you could drop by it soon, as I may post stuff there before I do them here. I bet you could teach me a thing or two about sensual writing!

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Mmmmmm... I loved this piece..

and what can I say when someone finds the G-spot and knows what they are doing...(yummy x 10)

Unbridled_PassionUnbridled_Passionabout 17 years ago
long winter nights

always fun

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Nice imagery of being sent over the edge. This would work better by breaking it into strophes (5, perhaps) and using some punctuation: periods, commas, & semicolons.