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Click hereEvery damsel desires for a purple prince,
Whom she would see in her dreams,
Who would bring her flowers,
And make her feel like a princess....
One who would call her every night,
Just to feel her sleeping alright,
One would take her for shopping,
To see her right near him smilling,
One who would be a perfect lover and admirer.
When asked he would reply,"Hey sweetheart I like you the way you are..."
One who would make her laugh and talk about cruise.
And diminish her all worries and woes...
One who would thank the lonesome star,
For connecting him with her so far....
One who would take her on a yacht,
for a lonely wintery evening sunset...
One who would not even blink once,
so that he wouldn't miss her one glance...
One who would gaze at her,
and say when you smile; you look even more prettier....
One who would hold her palm in his palm,
and warm her up in his arm...
One who would say a thousand " I LOVE YOU"
every time she gets upset and complains...
One who would surprise her with presents,
which would be filled with his essence....
One who would take her for long drives,
and wait hours for her downstairs...
One who would give her kiss,
everytime she is down with tears....
One who would reach her at midnight,
just to wish her a simple " GOODNIGHT
thousand of dreams and thousand of dreams"
But the almighty know for whom is the perfect flavour,
every damsel would be blessed with her prince charming....
who would be trustworthy, caring and loving...!!!!
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1= How the hell is this fit the titile? 2= As the title said 'Piss Poor Grammer.... To Say The Least. 3= You know what that reminds me of? It reminds me of a spiled bitch. And you are saing that all girls are spiled little princess bitchs! That sounds dngrousely close to a goddamn sexist comment. And I could go on and on....
You've over done the 'one who's'
stanza 1 line 2 should be 'who'
last stanza line 1 is ungrammatical