- Non-Erotic Poetry
- A Moment
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i am quiet
praying,wishing
i could erase
my stupid past.
that ounce of doubt
in your mind -
breaks my heart
makes me wonder
am i good enough?
have i ruined us
before we had a chance
to begin?
can't blame you
i guess
mistakes made then
affecting us now
wanting, needing you
wrenches at me
aching, terrified
you might go
my gut clenches
blood pressure rises
i curl up
and hide my head...
this too will pass
i know you love me
despite myself -
stupid past and all.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 7 years agoGood try, but ultimatly leaning dangrousely close to the uninspiring zone..
Amyfriendabout 17 years agoclaw away at her inner emotions.. as she doubts her own worthiness in her lovers eyes.
duddle146over 17 years agoA woman is consumed with self doubt and a bit of loathing for her past mistakes ~ She comforts herself knowing she's loved.
This poignant rendering is sentimental and sad ~ with a delicate seasoning of hope. Well Crafted.
