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- a Paris Rose un
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A Paris Rose un~
"a terrace and wine"
paint brush streaked clouds
across a baby blue sky
rot iron terrace breeze
on a dimming summer's eve
a g'light glimpse at the tower
through red of strained grapes
swirling a potion of passion
A Paris Rose from Napes
long sheer slender leg in swing
across a twin with hint of garter
black strap shoe, one rocking
short dress up a little farther
dainty light lift arms curl
sweet lips nip at a sour rim
rose red mouth painted in pari'
imprint tainted on a glass brim
tender finger trails a collar seam
down to a button's closing
twirling in an apex of thought
light wind gust, blouse flowing
finger raked brushed back hair
sunglassed stare into nowhere
sipping the aged and rare
legs open wide a self-dare
slighted smile from frisky lips
glancing about at those adrift
busy bodies nary a stare
notice was 'one' still aware
She pulled up tightly in her chair
blushed, which was genuinely rare
darting eyes at a gentleman's stare
wicked grin and posture paired
mustered sips and settling grin
waiter poured a glass again
shifting hips and pouty lip
legs widened a tiny bit
lucky man with a birds eye view
of a Paris kitty just shaven new
his hands diving into adjustment
while an attentive focus grew
she slid a bill
from her shoulder strapped purse
stood well balanced
blossoming bosoms burst
walking away
her hand and purse played
pulling out
her panties, light gray
dropped them on the table
as she walked by
of the man with smile
a French mile wide
hips swayed with confidence
perfect stepping toes
a Lady of fashion
A Paris Rose
- COMMENTS
WickedEveover 19 years agoYou're going to hate me, but since I know you really don't, I'm going to offer suggestions. I'm going to poke at your words and make them cry--actually, only a couple of them.
paint brush streaked clouds
across a baby blue sky
(baby blue needs to either be blue or some other interesting descriptive word. Baby blue is pretty cliché, though all cliché words can work. I think in this case, I'd just go with blue sky or maybe "across a blue baby sky" which is weird but interesting.)
a g'light glimpse at the tower
(What is g'light?)
long sheer slender leg in swing
(If you want to stick with the long, sheer and slender description, then try something like: slender sheer leg, long in the swing. This breaks up a long string of adjectives.)
Other than that, there's a lot of good stuff here.
