tagErotic PoetryA Penis and Pussy Villanelle

A Penis and Pussy Villanelle

byWillOtheWisp©

Breathed like a secret in each other's ear,
peeking together beneath the cover.
There is a penis and a pussy here.

And then frolics upon the chandelier
of each other, and the tickles and slurs
breathed like a secret in each other's ear

are Heorot fires when Grendel leers.
A double-take, and again discover
there is a penis and a pussy here

and the compulsory that they cohere.
Position, velocity, and angular,
breathed like a secret in each other's ear.

The flesh is ridden, but never steered.
The fish will wiggle as the sea prefers.
There is a penis and a pussy here

last we checked beneath our fur. But we're
wise to check again, and again concur,
breathed like a secret in each other's ear,
there is a penis and a pussy here.

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by legerdemer12/25/16

Enjoyed it muchly!

I like the contrast between the playfulness, near-schoolgirl ditty, and the carnality - beautifully woven together in the villanelle form. It was recommended in the PF&D thread - thanks, AH, for pointingmore...

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by AlinaX12/22/16

I do love a villanelle.

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by Anonymous12/21/16

Use this as a template, "The penis and the pussy

set off in a pea green boat"....try for something lighter, your poem is too dense

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