A Quick Fix

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Picture yourself by a stream.
Nothing can bother you,
no one knows the secret place.
You are in total seclusion from the world.

Birds are singing.
The soothing sound of a gentle waterfall fills the crisp, cool mountain air
with a cascade of serenity.

The water is clear.

You can easily make out the face of the person
whose head you're holding under the water.

There now, feeling better?

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Soothing

A place to let the rest of the world go bye ~ a place of serenity. Just what I've always looked for ~ send directions, please.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A poet and

Problem solver of

The highest level of quality ...

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Anger Management?

The person in your poem seems to be managing quite well. The ending hit me like jumping into a cold mountain stream.

ty,bd

4degrees4degreesalmost 19 years ago
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very good.

it would be amusing

if i didn't get such

a sincere vibe from it...

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