A Seduction in the Dark

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LadyJeanne
LadyJeanne
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Lickable earlobes met kissing lips
and slipped between their skin.
Delicate strokes of a fingertip
stirred liquid needs within.

Our squirming hips and arms wrapped tight
heated senses gently pressed.
In a room too dark without a light,
I'm captured on his chest.

Seduced with giggles, induced by touch,
allaying all restraint,
Fingers floating...tempting; I indulge
in caresses very faint.

An expectant shyness swiftly eased
as tangled legs unlaced;
I gripped hot flesh and slickly teased
a wetness, subtly traced.

Groans ignited; desires filled; I
released him with a rush -
our trembling bodies softly stilled; heart
beats lazy in the hush.

LadyJeanne
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cloudycloudyabout 19 years ago
Sweetly sexy!

Again, an undercurrent of joy flows through your words, subtle but unmistakeable. I enjoyed this immensely!

tolyktolykabout 19 years ago
Incredible!

You are a fantastic erotic poet LJ!

Dar~Dar~about 19 years ago
enjoyed

in your third and fifth stanza, you didn't rhyme the opposing lines as in all your others. I realize thats nearly immpossible to do, but It did interupt the flow of the poem, as I had to reread all that was before to see if the error was mine or a purposeful move by the writer.

otherwise, the poem is lovely, I like that it's light yet still hot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
It's hard to rhyme erotically

You did a great job. Nice work, LJ.

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