- Non-Erotic Poetry
- a sharp poem
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Click herethe one I need to write
no, no personal details
just bits of dried blood
clinging behind the fresh
that slides along our razor’s
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- COMMENTS
KOLKOREabout 16 years agoCombining a 'playful' sensibility (as shown by the 'image' of a razor) with dark even ominous feelings, is not an easy concoction to swallow; thus the edgy quality. But hey, who needs plateaus in poetry?
duddle146over 17 years agoI enjoyed the literary journey of your words. A bit of a different format.
jthserraabout 20 years agoI initially wanted to call the vertical edge a bit gimmicky, but no, after reading the poem... it works. Few words but deadly intent... well done.
jim : )
annaswirlsabout 20 years agoyou have thrown a handful of pine needles into the fire of literotica. with a crack and a burst hope you have many hands and a big pile from which to throw
