A Simile for Your Kiss

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Cordelia
Cordelia
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A Simile for Your Kiss

The full moon took its time, and then my breath
Away as I saw clouds reveal its light;
Then gave me pause as when our lips first met.
I gasped in recognition -- pure delight.

Remembering your kiss, your touch -- that smile
Stopped my anguish at a moment’s crest
As liquid silver was my truth. And while
I memorize your touch upon my breast.
And, stopping me with white, the water mist
Reflects the singing moon as tarnished fire.
Just where my breath had paused before your kiss-
That same soul-filling memory of desire.
Mixing milk then bronze into the vial
The moon is metaphor still in your smile.

Cordelia
Cordelia
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LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 34,000 poems.

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
lost love

A looking back with longing ~ remembering happier days.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Worked your poetic devices well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
loved it

i loved it cordelia. i usually have a hard time with poetry but this has such an easy flow. i found it very sensual. you're one teriffic writer. oak man

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