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Click hereThis has some strong potential, but it reads to me as if it not yet finished. There are some very good lines and images, but (IMHO) there are also some that need to be tweaked and polished a bit.
May I be so bold as to suggest that you put this one aside for awhile and come back to it in a month or so with a clear eye.
Keep writing (and reading)!