- Erotic Poetry
- A Storm is Coming
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Click hereA moment of clarity
An announcement hangs on the air
Anticipation
A storm is coming
My eyes grip you
Lightening flashes
We count together slowly
1… 2… 3...
and the thunder is heard in your heart
My hands bring down the rain of fire
You are scorched and wet
You are cold and quivering
As dry earth you soak in the pain
You feed that which grows
Manhood planted in the earth
Warmth begins to spread
Whimpers give way to groans
Your mane snatched tight
It grows inside you
A wild look in your eyes over your shoulder
A moment of clarity
An announcement hangs on the air
Anticipation
A storm is coming
- COMMENTS
MagicaPracticaabout 17 years agoStrong and vivid images make this a very evocative piece. Well done!
WickedEveover 19 years agoActually, this stanza interests me:
My eyes grip you
Lightening flashes
We count together slowly
1… 2… 3...
and the thunder is heard in your heart
As a reader, I'd like more to be done with this. I think there's a poem here in just this one idea--two lovers counting after each lightning flash.
