- Erotic Poetry
- A Woman's Vagina
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Click hereA hole waiting to be filled
With something other than just more hole
A loveliness not too many men become a part of
Due to their own stupidity
A decoy to onlookers who just want a piece
Part of childbirth
Part of pleasure
Part of what it means to be a woman
A mouth that wont slam shut
Cause everyone else is talking;
Talking about nothing but what they need; want.
A safe place women can go to
As they watch in the distance
The men hounding them down for their little space.
A closerness to divinity in all forms woman
A santion free of stress and calamity
Unless put there by said she person.
- COMMENTS
WickedEveover 18 years agoI do have some questions about this poem, but I'll ask just one. You're listing many things about a woman's vagina. You have one line that reads "A safe place women can go to" Go to their vaginas? If not the vagina, then where? It's not clear. There are other problems I see. You may want to visit the poetry forum at literotica and ask for some assistance before submitting your poetry. Many of us do. People there can be quite help. :)
