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Click herea work of art only i can understand
a walk that would cure blindness
and a touch every baby needs
everytime i look i thank god for being a man,
deep and soft is the look in her eyes
she has an attitude every woman admires
if an angel was this pretty i would be surprised,
she leaves much to the imigination
but still enough to make me lose control
and a stance most models use as a pose
with a personality only queens strive for,
just the sight of her lets me know i have been granted a wish
a body screamin to be hugged
and lips that yearns to be kissed,
a work of art that only i can understand
its okay she doesnt know me
but for her i would count grains of sands
A man who would count the grains of sand ~ for the gift of her love.
Sentiments so fine
But spelling and punctuation needs work;
Imagination needs to be fixed,
Among several others.
a little over the top sentimental can sometimes be overlooked, but poor editing stops me cold.