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Click hereCYCLES.....LIFE IS A CYCLE...FROM SWIMMING UP RIVER---OR HANGING IN A POOL....THE QUICKER ONES GET A CHOICE---THE OTHERS INEVITABILITY...THERE IS DARK--- THERE IS LIGHT...A SHOCK MAYBE....AND THE NATURE CYCLE BEGINS...EAT, SLEEP SHIT AND GROW...DEVELOPMENT-MENTAL AND PHYSICAL...MORE CYCLES ENGULF US...TIME CONTINUES NEVER CEASING....THE LIGHT FADES...DARKNESS IS NOT AN OPTION.
Did I like it? No. I tend to agree with Vapspegeo. I think you were trying to hard to sound "Deep." HOWEVER, BnB55 loved it. So maybe it's like art. Not everybody digs the same thing. Point of fact, I hate the works of Andy Warhol. So what does that say about my opinion?
I have to disagree with Vapspegeo. I think it is incredible! Keep up the good work. :)
Nice rhythm but it still sucked just say what you mean you don't need a part II