Abandon

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Go ahead
abandon all reasonable thought.
Get Your cannons out,
aim straight and high.

Shoot...
Blast...
Take'm all out of commission.
Show no mercy
for the weak, softhearted,
or unknowing.

No rhyme or thought
can get through.
You are so witty,
charming, all knowing.

Mean...Cruel...
Heartless Baboon.
So perfect You!

Take careful store
of all that's good.
Blow it to smithereens!

Grind it to dust
beneath
Your godlike feet.

Abandon the writing,
You know so well.
Announce to all others,
spouting off
Your own stupidity.

Take charge and command
us Lesser Mortals,
who have Dared
to question Your superiority.

Riddle me this,
Girl...
How the hell do you sleep at night?


~edit~chomp~hack~grind~
~do your damndest~

*Still Smiling in RhymeVille~

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swallowedscreamswallowedscreamover 16 years ago
I am wondering,

as this poem was submitted a while ago, if the chomp she took out of the subjects ass, has healed?Haha. I do so love when a person pushed, pushes back. Well done!

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
contentious

After reading this rendering ~ I know how a poet reads an undesirable person the riot act. She writes a poem. Wonderful read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
You do the

rhyme rant very very well...great work.

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
RF - You Rock Girl !!

Memo to self:

Don't ever raise the ire of RF.

She finds the "Special Interest Groups" that burrow underground; nothing is safe around her.

And as for Anon.....wonder which of the clique THAT could be......seems to be multiple personalities with severely challenged verbal skills......perhaps a bit delusional as she demands all conform to her poetry paradigm.....but are these blah blah shit shit rants so necessary....this is like intelligence of a whole new --- lower --- order.

Bill DadaBill Dadaalmost 19 years ago
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I love rants and this is a fucking great rant. Rant on, rant on!!!

BD

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