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She writhes,
Her body moves,
Moves with me,

Lost, completely,
In the world of her pleasure,
Reaching, grasping for release,

Her eyes, like fire,
Demanding what I'll willingly give

I'd give her everything.

Floating, like a petal on water,
My love, my life,
My total abandon.

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