- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Ablution
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Click hereWash your wounds in sweet water
get some knee pads for crawling 'round those rocks
gloves for hands ill used...
Breathe, find your center, focus
the jewel in the lotus becomes an eye
see yourself, be...
Rise from the darkness, seek light
look around at what you've found
beauty, truth, absolution
- COMMENTS
Tsothaalmost 10 years agoBeautiful poem, Harry. Each stanza develops a little idea, carries a little mood encapsulated. I really have nothing to add or remove from this one, it's perfect.
todski28about 10 years agoThat normally scr"ee"ms at you peaceful?
Some of the sonic work you do really amazes me.
buttersabout 10 years agothe continuity of the long drawn out eee sounds throughout does two things for me as i read this: first, they link it all together, knit it into one piece - and, secondly, it works on my mind as a long drawn breath, an exhalation... a letting go of the heavy, troubling, stressful. a very calming, healing feel to this, harry.
HarryHillabout 10 years agoAuthorit was written as a response to a friends poem about feeling down, bruised, abused, bleeding. good to see you. I had forgotten I offered this. :o
