about last night

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THIS IS
ABOUT LAST NIGHT

catching light
eyes
detach fight
fingers
on
skin
lips trace
softly
taste
devine places
attention
erase
intentions
of
another
hair pulled
tight
undone
buttons
lace on flesh
desire
between thighs
on
fire
voyeristic tendencies
sight
unseen
sexual motion
impeads
emotional
devotion
from behind
trapped
within
embrace
hot
shivers spine
grind
inside
once more
harder
breath comes
questions
lies
dirty minds
fuck
faces
hands knees
bound
before
thrashed tremble
whore
all fours
crashes
pleads
vengence
waves
orgasmic
passions
core

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
who the hell are you edgar allen poe

if you have nothing nice to say dick head say.....nothing

Epmd607Epmd607almost 17 years ago
it seems you're capable

this is a bunch better than that other bondage poem, 'though you slipped into some sinkholes of cliches i.e. 'thighs on fire.' And 'devine' is an acceptable deviation, whereas 'deva' is another form of 'diva' and 'divine' all share a common root. Not to be a dick, but it seems you can write a poem, you just have to dig a little deeper and not accept the first stream of con. word pairing that pops in yer head when writing.

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