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susansnow
susansnow
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I offer limb after branch and the things
you love the mouth and the herb dinner but
I know you prefer to put his between your
lips. I don't want to go home with you but
I want for you to leave with me on your mind
when you stroke your cock and think.

susansnow
susansnow
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susansnowsusansnowabout 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback!

The first three lines, I admit, are a bit nonsensical. Perhaps done purposely to veil some truth or fragment of personal history. I like to tangle and twist with gender though sometimes the attempt fails; it can muddle meaning.

CleardaynowCleardaynowabout 10 years ago
Fairly confused but really like the last three lines.

After several reads I still have not the faintest idea what the first three lines mean - even in the light of the last three - which I love.

And I am unsure whether mouth is in error for most or not ot if that is what I am meant to think. Also is it really 'his' in line three. Even the written sense of the last three seems a bit wonky.

But what a powerful delicious three lines they are.

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