Absorbing Invisibility

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Cordelia
Cordelia
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I sit in camouflaged desire,
repressing fevered whirlwinds,
becoming shade as you require.

To dim the violent purple fire
dilute until it’s crystalline,
and wait in camouflaged desire.

Add grey to brazen red’s attire;
suppress her strut in softer skins,
in paler shades, as you require.

Hush the lute, and stow the lyre,
dampen strings on violins.
I’ll listen, and conceal desire.

I’ll paint with words that you inspire
disguised in shrouds of discipline
and faded, as your needs require.

Awaiting signals, I retire,
patient in the blues I’ve thinned.
I wait in camouflaged desire
a paler red than you require.

Cordelia
Cordelia
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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
pleasant.

Your word choices were exquisite ~ a quiet lovely read.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 33,000 poems.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 33,000 poems.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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A pleasant read in which the poet manages to work both rhythm and rhyme;

Has a sing-song quality which makes it a special pleasure to read aloud.

Maria2394Maria2394almost 20 years ago
spun gold

I cannot believe I havent read this before!! I thought I had devoured everything you ever posted on here. this is wonderful, especially the last stanza. I love your work Cordelia, and the fact that you do not post often makes these even more appreciated :)

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