- Erotic Poetry
- Abstinent Deal
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Click hereIt's been seven days of wilful
waiting, my sultry words
seemed absurd when spoken
we agreed together, a smile
at how easy it would be,
Hazel eyes glaze in memory
of a week that's been,
of messages that dip
inside,
make you quiver
want lust, surrender
but
the release we seek
withheld
try to ease those thoughts
from troubled minds
that harden and leak
sinuous and slick
so many times naked
skin to skin but we wouldn't let in
hands massage your back and hips
on hands and knees
the tip of swollen sword rests upon
your open entrance
a slight push back,
a small thrust in
"NO" barked in agony
pain as
we abstain for another day
that lip bite,
almost tips me over the edge,
on the third day nearly snapped
screamed and cracked
you begged my "no"
with everything you had,
but we had a plan
here we are
hair dishevelled
our eyes level
inner fire consumes
exhumed from some
dirty place,
"Yes"
we collapse as addicts
giving in to cravings
our drug of choice
clothes are shredded
tension tearing a violin string
in a matter of moments your first
hit shatters
tremble shiver
scatters
droplets
a geyser erupts
the dam busts
and we
fried circuits, collapse
in smoking heat
of abstinent release
- COMMENTS
todski28almost 10 years agoAuthorAlso had it broken I.e.
abstinence
release
However I pose you a question what made you look at it as oxymoronic
What phrase, catch, or even at what point did that become clear?
twelveoonealmost 10 years agoabstinence? release
would be more denotative, perhaps sound better...
you play these slight games when you write....see comment on OB's
anyway 5ed, as I don't think I voted before.
todski28almost 10 years agoAuthoris oxymoronic- how often if you are healthy and promiscuous do you willingly turn down sex?
I doubt too many people have actually tried to do this in terms of their sex life, so the use of cliche in text is an attempt to contrast the underlying theme of deliberate abstinence for a time frame.
Think of it like a crash diet, try a lemon detox and try and tell me that you can think of anything other than food.
The meaning is really an attempt on my part to show a difference between plain sex and the end result of deliberately saying no, but still acting in an intimate manner through the course of normal life, the tension is palpable to the point you tend to fight a lot which takes the top focus off sex but underneath there is some crazy termoil all you want to do is tear each others clothes off and fuck.
And when you do finally reward eachother it's unlike anything else.
twelveoonealmost 10 years agojust kidding, 2 questions
in the bulk of this, how far off are you away from the cliche?
abstinent release
noun phrase. any reason not to break it up into 2 nouns
make that 3 questions...
abstinent release?
my reading of this is oxymoronic, what is the intended meaning here?
