- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Achanaich
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Click hereEarnest Prayer
Give over your patience
to my stumbling tongue
Waiting Mountains
so that I may speak
with a voice
stronger than your
foundations.
Grace me with the visions
that have tread your
granite eyes
so that I may see
the mind of
of eternity.
- COMMENTS
duddle146over 17 years agoLet me see through granite eyes ~ that life's meaning may be more clear.
sweet GA peachesover 18 years agothe thought you lead
others to, nothing short
about it ...
this was AWESOME..
and powerful !
-sGp-
sackover 18 years agonot sure what you meant by "granite eyes", but the other word painting was masterly!
