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RossDaniels
RossDaniels
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Wake me when you come to my dark room
With the white heat of forbidden fire
That drips from your fingertips and sears me,
As my senses come to life again with your presence.

Make me remember once more how it feels
To be alive, on fire with the need of something
That cannot quite be described, yet feels
Familiar and right as it embraces my very being.

Break these bonds that imprison my heart,
Shackles that have held me in this sad place,
Thrown off at your unexpected touch
That leaves me grateful for the chance to feel again.

Take me to unknown heights of ecstasy
With but a single touch of your lips to mine,
As you transport me effortlessly to that magic state
Where lovers whimper gratefully with mutual release.

Slake my thirst with your sweet nectar
That coats my tongue and lingers in my mouth
Until my soul once again becomes parched
And cries out for yet another taste of you.

Until I ache at the very center of my being
At the thought that so much time must pass
Before you take me once again to that sweet place
Where our desires entwine and all our pieces fit.

RossDaniels
RossDaniels
225 Followers
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LolitaXXXLolitaXXXalmost 13 years ago
You are unbelievable!

Wow! MMMMMMMM...so much passion, so beautiful! I do believe that you could talk me right out of my panties on the coldest day of the year...giggle!

Southerncharm48Southerncharm48almost 13 years ago
Touched me

This is the best and touched me so much. Brings out a personal experience for me. I love this,Love it, Love it.

nz_marienz_marieabout 17 years ago
wonderful

Very good, I especially love the 2nd to last paragraph, that could be a poem on its own, kudos to you Ross :)

MichelinBMichelinBabout 17 years ago
Loved it!

I would have loved to be the inspiration for that delicious piece!

Great job!

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Oh my what a sweet...

poem that promises an upcoming lovemaking session. Nicely done.