- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Acrimony
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Nothing deflates like laughter. Nothing may
outdo intentions like a mocking smile,
inverted echo of our feelings, glad
desire’s denial. On the copper plate
time’s progress etches each new biting line
across the happy image first designed
when moods were not yet outlined and when both
our hearts seemed open - ere I understood
how cold contempt makes fools feel fools for good.
- COMMENTS
tazz317almost 12 years agoare etched in copper, used once and destroyed for posterity, TK U MLJ LV NV
SweetOblivionalmost 12 years agobut this bit is a mouthful, with no punctuation:
On the copper plate
time’s progress etches each new biting line
across the happy image first designed
when moods were not yet outlined and when both
our hearts seemed open
And not sure about the 'ere'
