Adieu

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Du Lac
Du Lac
15 Followers

The fire within,
Once so new,
Now gone,
Put out,
I have lost you.
Sad is my heart,
For a time held by few.
Closed doors now stand,
Between me and you.
We had the chance,
For a moment we tried.
I took my stance,
Neither of us lied.
Your wall is too tall.
I knock on the gate.
Never you answer,
It is just too late.
An effort so grand,
For just a touch of your hand.
Pull back you do.
I now have a clue.
You I let go,
Your pain does so flow.
I offered my love.
Friendship above,
Forever I stand,
Your greatest fan.
Lessons you taught me,
Simple and true,
Trust and be open,
Now I thank you.
I see now my love,
The time has gone past.
The moment ,the second,
A shadow is cast.
The wall is too high,
The answer is true,
My love goes with you,
I whisper adieu.
Dlt copyright August 14 2004 all rights reserved

Du Lac
Du Lac
15 Followers
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EmJ0385EmJ0385almost 17 years ago
such sadness

as the love you dreamed for seems to vanish. Emily

SweetDealSweetDealalmost 17 years ago
a hollow feel

when love is gone, that hollow feeling seems as though it will never fill. And when it does, you can never quite believe it. Terrie

OSoBuffOSoBuffalmost 17 years ago
Feel great sadness

Being so completely in love, reading this made me feel great sadness at someone losing love.

CaPic267CaPic267almost 17 years ago
sad

This one is so sad, like a story of a love lost -- like saying we tried but never coould make it. CP

BikeNutBikeNutalmost 17 years ago
Poignant

Moving look at when love doesn't connect. Billie

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