tagErotic Poetryadvancing into the sunset

advancing into the sunset

bySenna Jawa©

     the two dimensional surface
     and the selfboat of my body

     from another dimension
     your warm presence
     seems
             in this cool ocean
     more real
            than my own

     with every breath of the salty water
     i taste roses
            of your wavy breasts

     the ocean passes by (the sun is red)

     i wear horizon
          'round my head
     
     



wlodzimierz holsztynski ©
      1989/1990
       dec/dec

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