- Erotic Poetry
- advocatus diaboli
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Devil's advocate...
I've been called
the dude...is one I understand
fallen angel...
better to reign then serve
so human is this feeling
animal...
cravings
savage....
....howling
immolation of all that matters
to taste your being
lapping a tongue up, down
internally...swallowing every drip
that proceeds
bone white...thighs spread
goosebumps alive
while hands divide
moist, damp
pink silk
all that makes you woman
I diffuse
plunge
gape
nipples...ardent...insolent
elliptical...spittle surrounds them
as fingers probe
fleshy down
dipping in...
sighs...moans
down I plunge
tongue lapping as hands massage
fingers pinch
two become one
as heads kiss
inside...plumb
lips touch lips
entwined as one
Creature to creature
body of one...
legs spread, feet high
between I plunge
tears, screams
violent
nails scrape skin
inside you
sun sets
rises again
inside you
as nails scrape
skin
digging deeper
again
fuck all that is...till the end
The universe began with a bang
ending in a whimper...
from the throat
of a woman
- COMMENTS
YDDalmost 20 years agoThe poem moves along in strong short phrasing.
images created in few words.
The poem stands graphically on its own.
I would only ask to see one word changed.
annaswirlsalmost 20 years agoI was immediately drwan in to this poem, the growl resonated, but then lost it's strength with the increased explicit-ness (hmm) of the poem. I would have liked it better if some of the middle were missing. my humble opinion please don't write a poem about this comment heheheeeee!
