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A ghazel
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charmscale
charmscale
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His hair is long, and coarse, not fine
A a golden shade that's pure and fine,

We lay side by sweaty side.
He asks of my day; I answer, “Fine.”

I run my hands through long gold hair.
As his hands rub, it feels so fine.

Sated and languid, we lay side by side.
If eternity waited, that would be fine.

I love him, this lovely lover of mine,
So when he asks, “Again?” I answer, “Fine.”

charmscale
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charmscalecharmscaleover 6 years agoAuthor

Sorry. I used google translate.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 6 years ago
Charmscale :

It ain't trash , it's a famous Hindi/Urdu Ghazal from tye superhit Dushman sung by Kishore Kumar and picturized on Rajesh

Khanna!!!

erectus123erectus123over 6 years ago
Dear Sir-- with respect

in support of Mr. Ashesh, I do think under the United Nation's charter, a person has the right to comment in what ever language they chose. It remain our task to decipher it.

charmscalecharmscaleover 6 years agoAuthor
@Ashesh9

If you are going to comment on a poem, could you do so in the language it is written in, please? Seriously, if you are going talk trash about me, do it in such a way that I know what you said.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 6 years ago
Ghazal : tum likhogey???

Tumhara kaam nahin

kisi se ki muhabbat

kisi se bewafai

Rubaiyya ho ya Radha

tumhari daman mein phool hain kum

aur kaatey hain zyaada

wada tera wada

wada tera wada ....????

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