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I made it downstairs
everything was spinning
same as upstairs

the glo without W
everywhere

it seemed every gear in life
was jammed
and all fluid containing water
was frosting over

and that missing W
sleeping gently in some bunker
with the usual stupid smile
ignorant to my bliss
and of what was a planet
beautiful and blue
a coveted hovering
ball in deep cold space

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AmyfriendAmyfriendover 15 years ago
Very nice.

It certainly leaves food for thought and makes one think.

BikeNutBikeNutalmost 17 years ago
Quirky

Seems an odd and quirky piece ... water?

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Lovely

This poem has an almost mystical quality ~ a beautiful effort.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Look at all that W is missing!

{Even when awake?}

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