tagNon-Erotic PoetryAfter B.Okudzhava--a free variation

After B.Okudzhava--a free variation

bySenna Jawa©

the war's quick start
long last last breath
with the grains in my heart
don't rush my death

my Lady's soft glove
i wish i were smart
She looks from above
straight into my heart

a couple grains in my heart
blue sky above
i had no luck in death
i will have in love

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2014-12-29
(after Bulat Okudzhava)

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