After Dinner

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Remec
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A slice of cherry pie and some coffee
dab of ReddiWhip on both
sat on the table, cooling
while on the floor
crusty chocolate sauce and sticky honey
mingled in a sweet echo of
recent satisfaction revisited
after too long a time apart
panting and swollen
tongued, he feasted still
a tangy cream filling
he'd almost forgotten
their perfect concoction
that special dessert
simmering
and delicious.

This was written in tandem with Average Gina with her beginning and writing the odd lines and me writing the even ones.

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LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.

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SweetVASweetVAabout 19 years ago
Now I'm hungry..

(er)! Great visuals, thank for the taste! :)

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Delicious!

That sure is a tempting, tasty dessert.

average ginaaverage ginaabout 19 years ago
I'm shameless

I had to come back to this to see what we did and hot damn that is good! I can't believe that I wrote those lines! Where was my head at? I think your av just brings out the worst in me. LOL It is really good stuff!

doormousedoormouseover 19 years ago
Ahh...

Just gotta love whipped cream ;-)

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