After; In Space- (Villanelle)

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Copyright 2003


I could be a blazing comet, flying in the infinite black of space
Painting colors on that sheet of darkness with my own finesse
Weaving through the spotted lights, a brilliant chase.

I would hurtle in the black of the empty, at my own pace
Singing out my harmonies, conquering your distress
I could be a blazing comet, flying in the infinite black of space

But I am not a comet, burning brightly in a higher place
I sit beside you, whispering to you; give up your stress.
Weaving through the spotted lights, a brilliant chase

A hope of life more elemental, a life of grace
Of magics reflecting brightly in your eyes; success!
I could be a blazing comet flying in the infinite black of space

Believing with the wonder of the entire human race
Like that of a child at its' magical existence; transgress!
Weaving through the spotted lights, a brilliant chase.

Take this life, for your old, replace
Feel the elementals communal touch, a caress.
I could be a blazing comet, flying in the infinite black of space
Weaving through the spotted lights, a brilliant chase.

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
renewal

Trading your old life ~ for one of renewed hope.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Well done on one of the more difficult forms.

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 20 years ago
Stellar!

Great Job Goddess!

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