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Click herePast hard-fought delay, and the assuring spring
Of snares well-regarded (few to count, but
A cordial portion) I catch my way
Recurred onto routine shallows, among
Lowlanders quick of surmise, if taxed
With quiescent invention
And mark the last nicks and notches
Poxed upon the searing sybilline blades;
New news is no news, wonder nothing,
Broadcast intransitive, signs and blooms.
I revel the abacus of body thrift
Finger beads curve sparkle honey
Doubtful stars and other turncoat pilgrims
Flash beholden, unlured but allured.
but still not sure of meaning, so maybe you can explain it on the poetry form so wittle me understands. You have a poet's voice, the challenge is retaining voice and writing a poem that more than you understand. Nonetheless, I liked it as ear candy.
I got lost in this one too but it is very well written and good intentions sometimes get lost in the mix. I have enjoyed you work previously and will continue to do so I feel.
some works better than others and overall the effects overshadow the narrative--it sort of gets lost to me in all the metaphor and trick the eye technique. Still it's fluid and you write well. I'll be looking to reading more from you.