After The Tsunami

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Then...


Screams of the injured    Can I help you?
Trees split in half       Hold on to me
Children sobbing          Don't give up
Houses crumble            Tread water
Body bags                 Love you
Death                     Live
Dea                       Li
D                         L


A world upside down       The bleeding stopped
Cars floating by          We're almost there
Boats sinking             You look great
Trains askew              I found her
possessions               He's fine
just a                    Breathe
tag                       Brea
ta                        Br
t                         B


The waves will recede     The waves will recede
The waves will            The waves will
The waves                 The waves
The wa                    The wa
The                       The
Th                        Th
T                         T


And the healing begins.....


Exclamations of rapture   People help themselves
New branches growing      Lovers hug forever
A baby smiling            Heads above water
Memorials                 Courage prevails
Living                    Loving hearts
Liv                       Loving
Li                        Lov
L                         L


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Please God
Watch them
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AmyfriendAmyfriendalmost 17 years ago
The format

almost threw me for a loop but it served its purpose and made me read each line. You captured the tragedy well and brought out salient points that should be remembered by many. The awesome power of mother nature shouldn't be tinkered with.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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That one line says it all: "A world upside down"

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Unique!

Color me amazed! I have never encountered such a very different format for a poem. The format itself caused the subject matter to stand out in stark relief from the usual lines we see written by other wonderful poets. Such a complete treatment of after effects of the Disaster. Well done!

BelegonBelegonalmost 19 years ago
Wow!

just very impressed. great work, visually and emotionally as well as the actual wordcraft.

dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 19 years ago
once i opened....

this one up, the direction quickly took hold of me. i liked how it was constructed and the mood of the piece conveyed nicely. the ending may be able to elaborate on. a very thoughtful poem for those lost.......nicely done.....don

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